Some individuals argue that bikes execute the role of the most important vehicle in urban areas, whereas some people hold a different opinion. From my perspective, pedal cycle is vital due to its environmental benefits, however, there are several drawbacks of this mean of transport. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits of cycling and explain why I support bicycle journeys.
On the one hand, bicycles are eco-friendly and sustainable.Firstly, many cities are now face up to severe impacts of air pollution, which has been mostly caused by the emission of gas vehicles,such as cars and motorbikes. Hence, using bikes is one of the best methods to reduce the amount of toxic substances, so as to improve the quality of human’s life and physical health. Secondly, bike riding can lower the accident rates.For example, city streets are always jam-packed, so that commuting by bicycles is an effective way to ease the traffic flow and make people travel more easily.
On the other hand, pedal cycles is not suitable for long-distance travel. Cycling needs physical strength and it can not provide some important functions such as air conditioner and cuishioned seats. Thus, people will be exhausted when they have to ride for hours. Furthermore, bicycle journey take more time for individuals to transport, especially going to work or school. For instance, students who use bikes tend to go to school later in comparison with those who use motorcycles or public transports.
To sum up, bike riding has a great variety of benefits including pollution-free and reducing traffic jams, despite a few cons such as time-wasting and lacking of infrastructures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...ustainable.Firstly, many cities are now face up to severe impacts of air pollution, ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , such
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... reduce the amount of toxic substances, so as to improve the quality of human’s life and...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20817843866 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03108734599 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68029739777 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5286649998 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14298632906 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485200774636 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358890589844 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754648662684 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532721522602 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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