Some adults think that children's leisure activities should not be a waste of time but should spend on something related to education. At the same time some believe that children should enjoy their free time by playing with other kids as they like. There can be advantages and disadvantages in both of these view points and let me describe my opinions below.
As anyone is aware, children should have a memorable, enjoyable childhood. This is the stage of life where they put the foundation to communication and development of personal and social skills. Even though children do not understand the ...
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my conclusion is children should not be pushed to do
my conclusion is that children should not be pushed to do
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