Some people believe computers are more a hindrance than a help. Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, every sphere of life has become computerized. Computers have made human life much easier than before. Still, some people hold an opinion that computers are disadvantageous for the mankind in many ways. But in fact computers in no way has proved bane for civilization.
On one hand, there are several reasons that make people believe computers to be disadvantageous to the human. To enumerate, computers are blamed for the rise in unemployment rate in this automated world. To explain, computers have replaced the jobs of thousands of workers, as it is claimed that with companies getting computerized many jobs like clerical and accounting jobs are getting replaced. For example, the position of the secretaries is taken by voice reorganization programs and teachers by computer video packages. Moreover, there is allegation on computers that it makes people less social able. As, computers have brought each and every information at home, thus people tend to interact less than before and every conversation takes place through computers.
On the paradoxical side, past two decades have proved that this despondency ill founded. Firstly, it provides jobs in the information and technology sector instead of destroying the opportunities. The mushrooming growth in “silicon valley” is an evidence of this development. Also, the new generation of today mostly prefers computers as occupation. Secondly, the advent of technology in communication sector has brought world close, today it is much easier to communicate globally at any time. As a result, the computer has led to an increase in interpersonal communication.
Considering all facts one can conclude that the fears about he computer are baseless. It is a machine that can be used effectively both in workplace and for social interactions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'about the computer'?
Suggestion: about the computer
...l facts one can conclude that the fears about he computer are baseless. It is a machine that can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43462897527 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19687819855 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5086930758 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169573749727 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529000641341 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498378065161 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960655124976 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632435419802 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.