Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is an argument about reasons causing crime. While many people think that crime may result from bad behaviours inside human since born, I would argue that crime is a result of social issues and poverty.
It is often said that everyone, when born, is always a good person. However, there are some exceptions. In detail, individuals even though are educated in a good environment when they were a child, they still commit a crime in their later life. Furthermore, after being released they turn back to become criminals. Given an example is that bad characteristics such as laziness and selfishness could also breed future offenders, who often seek to acquire easy money without working for it. A number of youngsters, instead of working for an honest living, they choose to steal from others. This could be a strong reason for thinking that those who have an inborn bad nature are more likely to break the law.
Nevertheless, it seems to me that social problems and poverty are main causes leading to crime. Firstly, living in lower-class is one of the reasons lead to an increase crime rate. If they do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be easily tempted to pursue illegal activities just to support their lives and families. Secondly, from the society perspective, unemployed is one of the reasons that people resort to crime to meet their daily meals simply because they cannot find a job. This is a serious problem need be tackled in many countries in recent decades.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, I believe that the problems in the society and living in poor conditions are main reasons that human does an illegal thing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50416320022 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7375651912 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222963530654 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706907510807 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815317346196 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154983339156 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101639072998 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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