In nowadays, it is widely argued whether recent advances with respect to AI pose a threat to mankind or if our quality of life is going to be benefited greatly by it. In my opinion, artificial intelligence is a reality which can only make the daily lives of people on this planet easier and more comfortable for the reasons mentioned below.
There are, however, those who believe machines and computers will inevitably reach a point at which they have become self-aware, and as a consequence, much smarter than humans. This could lead to a future war between men and machines similar to the one depicted on the “Terminator” movies franchise. In addition, the danger of machines turning on mankind seems more realistic considering the fact that all information is digitalized and stored in electronic hard drives. If computers become self-aware, they will be able to access easily information such as the defense system of a country or the banking details of the civilians of a country, and therefore harm people and their governments severely.
A more optimistic view, and one that I favor, recognizes the possible dangers arising from AI technologies, but also can gain significantly more buy using this technology reasonably. For instance, regarding the field of services, in some countries machines are instituted replacing tellers and providing automatically services to retail customers. Furthermore, with respect to medicine, artificial programs are developed that are designed to diagnose people, and even perform surgeries. Should this technology manages to work effectively, the positive outcome is unparallel and millions of lives around the globe shall be saved.
In conclusion, I believe that artificial intelligence can increase in many ways the quality of life on earth, despite its potentially hazardous misuse.
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- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants Why do you think people waste food What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away 78
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06258660749 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.5392271649 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234286817643 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714096198229 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517139712203 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121624648233 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193750988907 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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