In nowaday's highly industrialize tendency, the development of a nation have been decided with many factors, and I hold fast to the belief that the greater demand for means of transport and also constructions about safety roads play an important role in daily life. In addition, the issue as to whether traffic congestion how will be solved has remained source of controversy. Some arguments resist that the government should allocate budget for constructing train and subway lines,whlist, others believe the occurence of wider roads is a best way to minimize traffic jams.I will write down some opinions in this situation.
On the one hand, Train and subway lines play an vital role in big and modern cities nowadays because of a huge capacity. A train can contain hundreds of people, even carry more overload luggages.This can reduce the number of private vehicles. Furthermore, there would be less people on street during the rush hour at the same time, Second, rail transportation systems are established separately grom other systems or, sometimes, outside crowded city areas, and this relieves the density of passengers on public vehicles, hence reducing congestions caused by those means of transportation.
On the other hand, I would side with those who think that the mentioned investment on railroads or subway lines is only temporary and less effective than improving the size of roads and streets. Traffic jam is attributable to the density of vehicles that exceeds capacity of current road system. Increasing the size of roads would allow a higher volume of traffic and enable more vehicles to circulate smoothly,is believed to be a permanent solution to the situation of traffic jam. Private car owners are increasing in numbers owing to the enhancement of living standards, and they are unlikely to resort to trains or subwways since using their own cars is much more convenient. Therefore, better railway systems only encourage a part of citizens or those who have a shortcoming of income to use type of public transport.
In conclusion, the government should allocate the budget for the expansion of road systems, while it is an undeniable fact that the advantageous impacts of railroads or subway lines bring back some permanent provisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays highly industrialize tendency, the deve...
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...believe the occurence of wider roads is a best way to minimize traffic jams.I wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19452054795 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87617738014 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594520547945 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6499095698 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4166666667 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283053143676 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905227093908 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608530192752 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150253992608 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034397608273 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.