In this modern era technology shoot up day by day so that some individual opine that few quick massaging application like, WhatsApp or Viber on our smartphones makes communication more superior, while other deem that it only ruined the path of communication. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, indeed it is true that application like, WhatsApp, Viber or Facebook makes communication easier in comparison to past and it can be seen in many ways such as, if we look it in 19th century there was not any medium used for communication thereby it become quite hard to communicate with people who were living in another city or town so in case of any emergency old people face many complication to transmit information but in present time fast track communication is just a piece of cake due to various social media platform who provides amenities to make it more comfy a good illustration of this is in old days people send massage by post office with the help of latter which takes long period of time but now due to internet services it become much faster and uncomplicated. Moreover, it also provide chance to have a wide of friendship for instance now individual can easily made new friends from other continents through massaging apps as well as they get opportunity to learn new stuffs.
On the other hand, there are many loopholes of developing instant massaging application sharply it leaves a direct impact on mankind to put it in another way it making individual isolate from other, this is illustrated by in present time people are giving more priority to talking on social media instead of face to face interaction which has negative influence on society.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that massaging apps are beneficial to humanity but it has a major drawbacks of making people less socialize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...neficial to humanity but it has a major drawbacks of making people less socialize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83591331269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80215690377 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.440434425 49.4020404114 471% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.333333333 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8333333333 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.3333333333 7.06120827912 359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210412722546 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879024883108 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658268624579 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112662660747 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457971578382 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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