Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some hobbies are relative easy, while others present more of challenge. I personally believe that both easy and difficult hobbies can be fun and I completely disagree with the idea that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
On one hand, some people like choosing easy hobbies for themselves. Football is one example of sport activity that people can easily learn it. This hobbies do not require too much equipment than another sport, it is simple to study and it is inexpensive. I remember learning technique to play at local stadium that place gathers many people who have passion about football when I was a child, it is unforgetable memory for the rest of my life. Another hobby that I find easy and fun come from books that i like it. In my opinion, anyone can find out interesting books through smart devices such as phone, computer and ipad without too much about technicalities. Despite being straightforward, reading book is a satisfying activity.
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can be more exciting. We might experience greater sense of satisfaction if we pass over challenge whenever facing with extreme condition. For example, photo editing is a hobby that requires high level of knowledge and theoretical skill. In my case, I took more two years to study most basically technique related to photographic before i became competent at this activity and after period of time that I exposed to photographic equipment, I enjoy it much more than i did when i started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pressure and do it difficultly when we achieve a higher level of performance because the results are better and we deserve to gain more greater emotion.
In conclusion, some hobbies bring for us sense of feelings that we can not express accurately, both types of hobby can be fun and relaxing but in my opinion, we need to consider about particular choice to appropriate for ourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ivity that people can easily learn it. This hobbies do not require too much equipme...
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...sults are better and we deserve to gain more greater emotion. In conclusion, some hobbies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9018404908 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80121651361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5368363033 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278540401762 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979077704233 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115865849851 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204471350583 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139135320603 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.