Nowadays, sports play a pivotal role in our life, it does not only help us blow off some steams but also gain the connection or interaction between people with people. Some people say that celebrating a global sports event benefits the country, while others think have an opposite thought. In my point of view, I completely agree with the first statement that organizing a sports event brings us plenty of advantages.
On the one hand, holding an international sports event like World Cup or SEA Games will take part in the development of the country. Firstly, there will be a range of visitors and athletes come here for watching the event and traveling as well. Besides, those who are interested in that sports event from all around the world will have more knowledge about that country. Secondly, this results in the advancement in the economy and tourism of local residents. On top of that, paying attention to the global sports event can boost the passion of our children who will become the next player generation.
On the other hand, hosting an international sports event also has some drawbacks. Firstly, the government needs to allocate more funds to the facilities in order to contain a huge of sports enthusiasts from other countries. Moreover, with the growth of visitors, our countries have to deal with the rise of traffic jams and society's vices.
In conclusion, having a chance to celebrate an international event does wonder for the local people and lead to the innovation of economy and tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...of that, paying attention to the global sports event can boost the passion of our chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94921875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65941619662 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4003501873 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253913913358 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932266311426 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768775433087 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153725881328 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530245574887 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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