Life is all about ups and downs. Some think that there is no better decision than accepting bad condition, while other think that it is good for a person to try to promote the situation. However, I think is based on situation that what situation is faced and what should be done with it.
To begins with, accepting worse things would be good at some situation. Provided that a student failed to achieve his expected score just because of one or two percents marks and if he take it positively, the student would not leave any chance to lose his score in the next term. So, he will increase his study time and put his total attention into study in order to making best result. On this point of view, it is better to accept bad result to achieve a good thing.
On the other hand, there are some situation which should be try to improve. For example, someone have lack of money and he is suffering to leading his life ,and his daily needs are not fulfilled, at that moment, if he do not take any action against it, he might be got poorer. Nonetheless, suppose that he took attempts to promote the situation through searching for a job or doing a business would be the best decision for him. Due to earning some money, he could able to remove his poorness and fulfill his daily demand. In this situation, there is no better option than taking attempts to make present situation better.
In a nutshell, both side strong enough to do. However, it should be the best to observe the situation first and then take action, whether it is considered to be tolerate or tried to improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... of one or two percents marks and if he take it positively, the student would not le...
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Line 6, column 35, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...g. On the other hand, there are some situation which should be try to improve. For exa...
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Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tried'?
Suggestion: tried
...here are some situation which should be try to improve. For example, someone have l...
^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...be try to improve. For example, someone have lack of money and he is suffering to le...
^^^^
Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and he is suffering to leading his life ,and his daily needs are not fulfilled, a...
^^
Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...re not fulfilled, at that moment, if he do not take any action against it, he migh...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49134948097 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3121955473 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1275416014 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135304684398 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567631443679 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509186450515 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850250807926 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166404484808 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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