Some people believe that it is good to share information as much as possible in scientific research, buisness and the acadamic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, trend of information become more popular. Some people say that it is acceptably to share information about investigation, trade and education world, while others argue that share all information is too important. Both the views have been examined in the following paragraphs before my opinion.
On the one hand, we live in a society where new inventions happen almost every day. Sharing this information might be helpful to others who want to learn something new. The data who helps the nation or government, it should be essential to share. For instance, medicine or treatment of cancer have possible now by the medical science, so this is very pivotal information which need to share to awake the people for this. And it also encourages students to do better than this.
On the other hand, sharing too much information might be dangerous. For example, weapons and nuclear science is very confidential and sensitive. If it has fallen in wrong hand it might be dangerous for the country and terrorist can easily handle it, so it must have to keep secret. Moreover, giving information about our personal data it also might be risky, hacker can easily hack our data and share to the world. For example, social sites are not too secure for our data like chats, call recording and so on. So sharing data through social sites can also be risky.
In conclusion, i firmly agree with the second phrase, sharing information is much good in health, education, trade market and more. But sharing our personal details and nuclear science might be dangerous for nation. So, share only information which is necessary or only when it's needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can easily handle it, so it must have to keep secret. Moreover, giving informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94565217391 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60948810427 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5742862822 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297357561374 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102460788628 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975102026131 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200061997939 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662762937287 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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