Open access to information is a trademark sign of the present era as everyone has the opportunity to get any data he or she likes to have. For scientific, educational and trade development information sharing is important but it is significant to be careful about disclosing sensitive info which is not only precious but also can cause a personal problem. In my opinion, it is necessary to share data by minimizing its problematic sides.
Firstly, development or up-gradation of anything depends on information. For example, if there is no journal on scientific development, then it is not possible for a new person to make further development. Academic education also depends on this. In addition, the latest trade information is also important to keep track of customer’s demand. Finally, understanding all these things, it is useful to share information so that others can develop themselves and keep contributing to run the wheel of success.
On the contrary, one has to be cautioned regarding sharing personal information. For instance, in social media, i.e. facebook, twitter, some people love to give their personal details. It is very harmful to various prospective. A criminal can use that data in evil works. Not only that an innocent person can be trapped because of this info. So, everyone should be careful in this regard.
Moreover, a state can face a lot of problems, if its secret news comes to light. In recent time, various state official’s emails or contract information had been leaked by the website called Wikileaks and it created a lot of problems for them. These data are so important that has a great impact on country premiers and its citizens. In this regard, it can be said that everything should not be revealed freely or publicly.
In conclusion, it is not possible to create a bar on sharing information but before disclosing, it can be analyzed that whether it is for everyone or not. I think, it is wise to have access to those areas which will helpful for the wellbeing of human kind.
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 73
- In Many parts of the world today, there is a profitable market for products which lightens the skin.Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss the effect they have in terms of health and society. 61
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp 73
- The line graph compares birth rates in China and the US and how these rates changed from 1920 to 2000 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96187683284 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02177180205 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560117302053 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6817683898 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184575354541 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513195423217 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043408798257 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104110791386 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247228794598 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.