A number of people believe that its good to share or discuss information in scientific research, business and academic world, whereas, others believe that important information should also be shared freely. This topic brings significant attention of people and made it a heated topic among society.
On the one hand, it is already known that the most discussed topic among people is related to scientific research, business and academic world. People of any community or any level of education are aware about these topics. Therefore, it is very convenient for everyone to pick and understand these discussion. For instance, when there is a gathering and people of different field and different education level are sitting there, it is better to discuss about a research topic as it is very common and easily available on internet.
On the other hand, numerous people have opinion that we should also share important information freely. However, it is totally depend on what kind of information we are talking about. For example, the CEO of any company is not suppose to discuss companies strategy to anyone. A businessman should also be very careful while discussing his plans to others. anyone can copy their plan for their own good.
In the conclusion of above discussion, it is not reasonable to say that all kind of information have same value. Every piece of information have its own importance. It is the responsibility of each individual tp judge it before spreading it freely.
- Children are taught to push themselves to try and be better than their classmates rather than work together for everyone s profit Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 61
- Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good Others think children should do their homework on their own Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at a younger age Is this alternative a positive or negative development 82
- You have bought an item of clothing at an online store However when the item arrived it was the wrong size and colour Write a letter to the customer service manager of the company In your letter describe the problem say how you feel about this say what yo 73
- Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this discussion' or 'these discussions'?
Suggestion: this discussion; these discussions
...ent for everyone to pick and understand these discussion. For instance, when there is a gatherin...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ormation freely. However, it is totally depend on what kind of information we are talk...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... example, the CEO of any company is not suppose to discuss companies strategy to anyone...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anyone
...l while discussing his plans to others. anyone can copy their plan for their own good....
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'valued'.
Suggestion: valued
... that all kind of information have same value. Every piece of information have its ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, kind of, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12653061224 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79234390906 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7026361556 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333945037711 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10288445773 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142785310973 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205758357218 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142226238938 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.