It is believed by some people that sharing more information in business, scientific research and education is better while others opine that there is some vital information which cannot be shared freely. In my opinion, I agree with the former point of view.
On the one hand, people who support sharing as much information as possible think that this contributes to the development of the country. When majority of people in business education and research fields share more information among themselves, then it leads to mutual benefits which helps everyone to progress. For instance, if a student explains the concepts he understood or the way he did the assignment to other students, then it can benefit in other students to improve their grades in academics which can lead to higher number of educated people in the country. Also, there are many concepts interlinked in a scientific research. So, if most of the people share what they found in a particular research, it will help in the success of that research.
On the other hand, people who argue that some information is too crucial to be shared freely think that one cannot prove themselves as unique or smart if they share whatever they know. For instance, if Mc. Donalds share their process of burger making, then it will lead to less profits for them as many companies will be able to do the same burger. If scientist shares whatever he has found in a research to others who are working on the same research, then if the research is successful then its ownership cannot be given to one scientist.
In my opinion people should share as much information as possible to gain more benefits as any person cannot know every concept of some field. If everyone shares whatever they know, then much information knowledge can be gained.
In conclusion, it is better to share more Information rather than keeping it for themselves in research, education and business fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
... there are many concepts interlinked in a scientific research. So, if most of the people share what t...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun profits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... of burger making, then it will lead to less profits for them as many companies will...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ientist shares whatever he has found in a research to others who are working on the same r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93883792049 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65389162847 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474006116208 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0298466622 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390456169408 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15203509503 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997359201 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24233672659 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744782491945 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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