With the rise in modernisations, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless there are some issues, which remains irrevocable and complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that movies should be based on; social stigma or real life heroes? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that movies should be based on social stigma. Because, with the help of this one can learn about the surrounding awareness and respect the rights of others. Social stigma may then be affixed to such a person, by the greater society, who differ from their culture norms, on the basis of mental illness, physical disability, gender equality, skin colour, Religion issues, Nationality, and like many more. For example, through the movie Padman bulky tells us aninspiring story about the low cost sentry napkin, in India. Country were menstruation is still considered as tebbo. The Padman movie force the people discuss an issue which most people are scared to mentioning.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people think that movies should be based on real life heroes. To make their argument convincing, they claim that, real life heroes gives us motivation and encouragement doing best for nation, or freedom. For example, subedar
Joginder singh fights in three wars until he achieves martyrdom during the Sino-Indian war of 1962, would be the perfect illustration.
Nevertheless,weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands. So , both type of movies should be produce to create awareness among people of different kind of issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03896103896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74303871124 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9817821146 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419962563189 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130278820452 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173506037775 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200542976525 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878692736346 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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