Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The present time is perceived by some people to have a surfeit of alternatives available to every individual. However, while I concede that proliferation of several sectors has provided us many choices, I believe opportunities are still dearth in the emergency situations and place of necessity.
I admit the expansion of fields such as industrial, educational, political and so on has led to wide range of choices in every decision. For instance, the development of technologies and demand for a lot of qualities in work have made availability of a number of subjects in colleges to select from. Earlier, only science, mathematics, business, economics or sociology were some of the fields available for students to study. But now, business analytics, data sector, humanity, management and other countless subjects are present for the people to look towards. Not all the fields are chosen and as a result, the plethora of choices has turned into excess in some of the sectors. Hence, we have now opportunity to select from a number of alternatives for our study, work or life choices.
However, the augmented number of alternatives have been present only at a superficial level or in an unimportant situation. To take an example, the choices of medicines to take in critical condition of a patient is still lacking. Malign and chronic cases such as cancer, arthritis, etc., still demand significant research in finding a greater number of options for treatment. Chemo-therapy and gene-therapy are only two choices to select from for curing life-threating cancer stages. Moreover, the increase in number of subjects to study for students have not necessarily improved the availability of job choices for them. Hence, the options are not viable for us to choose in demanding environment.
Thus, even the excess of choices presented to us in the modern time has not upgraded the proportion of alternatives for us to select in time of need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., business, economics or sociology were some of the fields available for students to study....
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Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ra of choices has turned into excess in some of the sectors. Hence, we have now opportunity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13924050633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07883258111 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7926776862 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141516349574 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510484085099 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238272220225 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836587047924 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299305099933 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.