Along with the flow of society development, it is believed that options for individual lives have drastically extended. Whether or not this is a correct assumption. This essay will show my opinion about this issue.
In terms of study and work, it is obvious that every thing has gradually been easy for both students and employees to make their choices. For students, they do not have to go to schools or colleges for picking up knowledge, but they can totally register to an online class if they feel it is more covenient. This thing has been seen more clearly and commonly in quarantine period when many schools around the world had to shut down their offline teaching process and start lectures throughout online teaching softwares like Zoom or Google Meet. For workers, the time of intergration has opened so many doors of career path for them. They have various directions to go and can be able to expose to new niches of sectors, even challenge themselves by working abroad.
By the side of lifetime, we are also given chances to live in the way we like more than in the past. It is expressed from the smallest stuff happened daily. If we are not interested in eating at home for dinner, we can go to restaurant for our meal, and there are dozens of restaurants outside require us to make a mere decision. When it comes to marriage, the young are not forced to engage with someone their parents told them to marry anymore. This leads to the fact that they will have right to stay alone if they want or even turn their head to a same-sex marriage, which is accepted in many parts of the world nowadays.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement that people have a significant number of choices in contemporary day. As long as they can make wisdom decisions and be responsible for their lives, this will be a big advantage for everyone compared to the old age.
- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1 11
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vidual lives have drastically extended. Whether or not this is a correct assumption. Th...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...vidual lives have drastically extended. Whether or not this is a correct assumption. This essa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61194029851 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5101513659 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1409381568 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130029021046 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436930572132 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344286150064 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798837826008 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181931346318 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vidual lives have drastically extended. Whether or not this is a correct assumption. Th...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...vidual lives have drastically extended. Whether or not this is a correct assumption. This essa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61194029851 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5101513659 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1409381568 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130029021046 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436930572132 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344286150064 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798837826008 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181931346318 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.