Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Diversity is one of the most typical characteristics of modern society, which provides the new generation with more opportunities as well as more challenges. students have to choose a major for the future careers and adults have to decide the most profitable strategy for their career, and even spending holidays are facing too many attractive destinations, therefore, people are overwhelmed by a variety of choices every moment under different situations, from my perspective.
With so many choices, entertainment might not be a fun but a burden. For instance, people need to decide how to spend the holidays, which has perplexed the busy workers. In China, most programmers are required to work from nine in the morning to nine in the evening, six days a week. There are only two holidays for them in October and January. therefore, making holiday plans can be an extremely tough task, which is involved with questions like where to go, how long to stay and even how much to spent. Hence, holidays, though providing time for workers to be away from the endless tasks in the company, they have to face plenty of choices.
Besides, for students, confronted with a variety of job offers, they feel hesitated and confused. between salary and interest, which should be considered as the most decisive factor for a future career? Furthermore, how to choose between big cities with extensive opportunities and intensive pressure and small cities with limited possibilities and easy life?
students with little social experience are caught in these confusing paradoxes. However, they have to make a choice, even though the unknown situation may pose tremendous hardship on them.
All in all, the development of the society indeed provides more choices and consequently, people are confused by them more than ever as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8377413111 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4616190174 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116367450027 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399552913158 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357085183352 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612129814851 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250134738687 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.