Apparently, social media has connected people globally so it became easy for masses to stay in touch. Although, some people say social networking has bad effect on persons and societies. Though everything comes with boon and bane so I disagree with the statement.
In previous era, people had not had modes to stay in touch with people who live far from them, today social sites not provided the facility to talk or chat but they also got the chance to see eachother through videos chat. Moreover, they can share going activities with friends, near and dear ones. For example, Facebook, a social site which is helping people to stay in touch and doing numbers of activities at same time.
Furthermore, this platform has proven the huge platform for the common people to reach their voice to high authorities by trending hatchtag regarding any issue due to this indeed authority does reply for the resolutions. Consequently, it reduced the gap between normal person and administration. To site an example, COVID-19 has locked everything in entire globe due to lack of facility people are facing so much problems but social sites are helping them for introducing their trouble to authorities so they can assist people accordingly.
To conclude, people should use it wisely so they can get more benefits of it. Everything comes with two side if wise usage is done then it leads in positive way.
- In some societies obesity is regarded as a major problem Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned However others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity 68
- some people believe that social networking sites eg facebook had huge negative impacts on individuals and society To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 73
- Many different countries have most shops and products as the same Some consider it a positive dvelopment whereas others consider it negative Discuss both sides and give your opinion 95
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96170212766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60696563179 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2636104041 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18132622632 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668180192866 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609606676417 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103450146044 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535607651959 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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