Some people say that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime whereas others counter by saying the encouraging factor and situation to comite that crime should be considered for the punishment. I think that for the healthy people commiting crime punishment should be fixed however the punishment for the psycological ill people should be considered.
On the one hand, it is believed that people who are involved in the crime there punishment should be fixed. For example, in our country people who do corruption are sent to jail for the 5 years. Similarly people who are involved in the murder are sentenced for their lifetime.
On the other hand, it is argued that people involved in the crime there motivating factor should be considered and also there circumstance due to which they did should be taken in mind. For example in a rape case, before punishing any guilty first of all the situation in which it is done should be examined and what caused it to happen.
Finally, in my view the people who are healthy should be given the fixed punishment like a policeman involving in corruption should have fixed punishment as per the law of the country and the people who are not healthy like mentally not fit there situation should be examined like if a mentally retarded person kills someone then everything should be examined before giving punishment.
In conclusion, certain thing should be considered before punishing the guilty and they should be according to the law of the country.
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty society is also guilty of committing murder therefore life in prison is a better punishment for murderers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include an 83
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 61
- By punishing murderer with the death penalty society is also guilty of committing murder Therefore life in prison is a better punishment for murderer To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 56
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exam 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ption are sent to jail for the 5 years. Similarly people who are involved in the murder a...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the crime there motivating factor should be considered and also there circumstanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60928143545 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4453125 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3470444425 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.111111111 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1111111111 7.06120827912 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55577554111 0.244688304435 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280481264162 0.084324248473 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14383428546 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339345606684 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139263437231 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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