It is argued that tourists had better know the social and envirommental responsibility, whereas rest of the masses ponder that tourists should free from all the responsibilities. Therefore, I believe that every human being has reponsibility related to social and environment and the following paragraphs will discuss my arguments to support my view point.
To commence with, tourisum is increasingly popular with each day and they need to know the responsibilities among native people. If tourists cannot have any ristraction, then they do not follow the rules and regulations of the host country. Which leads detrimental impacts on native individuals. Numbers of tourist show huge repect and love to Indian culture. Such as, nowadays, foreigners visit in India to see historical buliding like Harmander Shahib, and give repect to this place from their heart that's why they visit in this place to cover their head. As a result, relationship among the tourists and local citizens.
Furthermore, there is a strong connect between environment and human beings thus, everyone has to know the reponsibilities about it. If tourists give appropriate intension to the safty as well as keep it spic and span other nations, then will again vist in these countries sans any kind of difficulty. Apart from this, they get a chance to enhance their knowledge related to local culture and traditions.
To sum up, it is clear from the above mentioned arguments that foreigners should accept the responsibilities among the environment and social things.
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- Some cultures value elderly people more while other cultures value the youth more Discuss both approaches and give your own opinion 71
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31020408163 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06879064969 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0407624655 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205463842969 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661612856877 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626166768016 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125338668495 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542821186807 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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