In fact, Travelling was rapidly increased in past ten years beacuse the mode of transportation was devoloped. Few say that car is the best mode of transport in order to travel in a city while others think that bicicle is better mode. In my opinion, travelling by cycle is healthy to enjoy the journey.
On the one hand, some inhabitants, car is the best mode of transport to travel inside the city because it is quiet comfortable. If we wanted to go faster and safer, car is the only way to choose. Although disel is required, we can experience a joyful journey. In addition, car protects from extreme climatic conditions. Because car contains air conditioner, it is flexible to travel in boiling temparatures. To illustrate, In a survey, It declared that 80percentage of people are intresting to travel on car within the city. Hence, car journey is safer and easier.
On the other hand, other people, Cycling is healthy to our life as well as to travel in country side. By the bycicle, we can travel even in traffic. It is tthe slowest mode to travel. However, we can travel without any cost. Even if we travel in car, we are unable return faster in hectic roads. Furthermore, by using cycles in order to travel, we can reduce the pollution. Pollution is the major issue in the world.In order to control pollution, cycle is the best to wander on streets. Therefore, health is being increased by the cycle transportation.
To conclude, I believe that cycle is the best method to travel within the city. Some inhabitants believe that car is the most useful method in order to travel faster and safer within the city where as others say that using bysicle is best way because we can benifit by using this mode of transport
- Newspapers publish information about the private lives of celebrities. Some people think that government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published. While, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Many people believe that modern technology has brought people together but others believe that technology has driven people apart Discuss both these viewpoints and give your own opinion 47
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts, and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opi 11
- Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'tthe the slowest'.
Suggestion: tthe the slowest
...e, we can travel even in traffic. It is tthe slowest mode to travel. However, we can travel ...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...llution is the major issue in the world.In order to control pollution, cycle is th...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...travel faster and safer within the city where as others say that using bysicle is best w...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... where as others say that using bysicle is best way because we can benifit by using thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69078947368 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69077338819 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2030338689 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249776823352 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753459933612 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637407507497 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16190093818 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387931607407 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.