Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
now a day, governments can't pay for all the problems and society should care about some of these problem and established some ingeo<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="some "></span> for helping people in difficulties. some people think, the best place for these activity is schools. because they are young and have enough time to do these. I believe its interesting for children and its a good idea.
As you know, the best place for teaching children some skills is schools. because they are fresh, they like to learn new thing and its interesting for them to help other people. Hence, they accept help other people and don't take any money. Besides of that, they feel good when they do that. however, they have enough time and energy, So parents and teachers should direct them to the helping people who is the best way.
Although, schools is the best place for teaching children to help to the charity, but it's not the only place. because children can't do all the jobs by themselves and they need other people to help them. Therefore, the second place for helping people is engeo. in this place all people with different age group work together to solve the problems. schools can be the place where children learn basic information about being generous and after that they should improve themself in the society.
In conclusion, we should teach children to do unpaid community service and improve them after that in society. governments should change their education system and train their children to be generous and helpful, because they are make their society in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04511278195 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00875914273 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503759398496 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5769114172 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262598423044 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100422812127 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647785607043 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169310417741 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336968100977 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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