Some people claim that living in big cities is creating difficulties whereas others think it makes easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people claim that urbanised lifestyles are better for residents, whereas others believe that cities make people’s life more difficult. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of living in metropolitan areas before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
Urban cities provide various facilities and services which make their lives more comfortable. For instance, the frequent transportation and 24/7 shopping make it possible to shop quickly, any time.Opportunities for human interactions are also increased in the city becaus there are many social events occurring in big cities and majority of them have a purpose of social bonding.
In contrast, life in big cities may cause environmental problems such as greenhouse gases, pollution, noise and congestion. Due to all these issues, people suffer various health problems. Moreover, the competitive environment in urban results in stressful lifestyles. This may cause psychological distress and may accumulate from many negative acts such as crimes, misbehaviour, distrust, depression, bullying and societal isolation.
In my opinion, the environmental and psychological aspects cannot be ignored. These problems outweigh the benefits of living in the city. Urbanised lifestyles bring too many disadvantages.
In conclusion, there are different perspectives of residing in big areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97422680412 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26234910314 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.119540468 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217651498698 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645520592077 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686198129779 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105691497055 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794378076258 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.05 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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