Health care is one of the inevitable issues arose from many people. So many believe that the food consuming by the westerners is unhealthy and influence on people's health. I agree with the point that their diet is worsening day by day and leading to harmful diseases.
In the last decade, many people are suffering from obesity because of consuming an over amount of junk food and unhealthy food. It has a detrimental effect on health and leads to several diseases such as heart stroke, Blood pressure as well. Moreover, this food doesn't contain nutrients, proteins, and carbohydrates which are required for better metabolism of the human body. nevertheless, there is also a trend in western countries on instant and frozen food and it contains a lot of chemicals along with some preservatives which influence people's health. moreover, Tv and media is also partially responsible for this because of persuading viewers and readers to buy these products.
Besides junk and frozen food, canned and packed food is also consuming by the children as well as adults. These products may be soft drinks, alcohol, or any other food. people should start eating fruits, vegetables, and food items that contain an adequate amount of proteins and nutrients. In addition to that, people who go to the gym or sportsman are consuming artificial protein shakes for body fitness and have a lot of negative effects on health. Some diseases can
inherit by future generations, so people better stop having such kind of harmful food at least for the benefit of future generations.
To sum up, I suggest that people from western countries should start having fruits, vegetables, and other healthy eatables instead of consuming harmful food. The government also should increase biological farms, ban packed food items, and bring awareness among people to change their diets in the proper way.
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- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 21
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, at least, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12052117264 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62739072021 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7309571439 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213452301422 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742345626536 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563565755757 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127029982421 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649963985863 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.