Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others contest those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. What is your position? Discuss both sides in your response.
In today’s world, construction industry has grown beyond wildest expectations. In most of the gigantic cities mammoth buildings have become a special feature which attracts thousands of people. However, whether the modern designs of buildings should be approved by government before construction begin or not is a controvertial one which is debated by many people. This will be criticized before a well reasoned conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, people who invest millions of dollars in a building expect to have a unique design which can provide needed outcome of the project. For instance, the Berj Dubai building design is one that has not been controlled by any government. This has allow the engineers to built the biggest and beautiful building of the world. This has allow them to earn millions dollars in revenue in a short period of time. These benefits won’t be possible, if the government implement any control in building design.
On the other hand, uncontrolled designers and engineers of buildings mostly consider the revenue rather than other crucial measures such as safety. To illustrate, a research conducted in Canada, buildings which are built without any government intervention are not capable of standing earthquake. In addition, most of them lack of most needed safety features such as emergency exit routes and fire control system. When looking at this example, it is clear that why some people believe that government intervention is necessary in building designs.
To conclude, in my opinion, government control is crucial to make sure the building is fit to stand without causing problem to users of the building. It is predicted that more government intervention will take place to lift the standards of buildings in the foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
... controlled by any government. This has allow the engineers to built the biggest and ...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
...autiful building of the world. This has allow them to earn millions dollars in revenu...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... millions dollars in revenue in a short period of time. These benefits won't be possible,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278125 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.16875 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09375 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.021875 0.0501214627716 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.015625 0.0437548338989 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1375 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89147929414 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.028125 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.096875 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.011925033212 210% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1786.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26666666667 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.438596491228 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.357894736842 0.28420135186 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.242105263158 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154385964912 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89147929414 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.5288671395 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8205000331 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 54.7894736842 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.25757575758 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416065958156 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0953665816993 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762653167425 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521231971095 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141275767286 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156184977592 0.134430193775 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644553025835 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31942973625 0.324371583561 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0167423748399 0.0638462369009 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274391338422 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393347902669 0.058150111329 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.