Change has profoundly positive effects on our lives, yet there are certain adverse ramifications as well. Some believe that is ill-advised and one should continue to do what they have always done. Others contend that change can be a pivotal measure towards prosperity and development.
People who love stability in lifestyle and avoid an unpredictable situation, create a comfort zone around of themselves and do not want to come out of it. By fearing the lose what they have, this group of people, do not have any aspiration to gain experience in new things. They do a repetitive work for a long time and become an authority and guidance for newcomers in it. They eventually get tired of doing the same thing and this monotony routine leads to boredom and losing interest in their job or routine field. Nevertheless, making the change in lifestyle leads to the appearance of hidden talent and improvement of personal abilities.
Changing job and routines frequently, on the other hand, provide pristine opportunities in which people would recognize and nurture their abilities and establish a dynamic thinking in their own mind. Moreover, their mind is more prepared to provide creativity and novelty in multifarious branches and fields and they identify their hidden talent and gift. For example, change will let a person find a better job or a better opportunity to show his/her own skills and ables, while people who are resistant to change will eventually be wearied by the monotonous nature of their work, those who embrace changes are insulated from this problems. Therefore, change in lifestyle has a great impact on important selections throughout of life and can lead excellent opportunities for improving quality of life. Personally, I believe that accepting change is essential to learn new things and make new ideas and help to realize our full potential. Changes create an exciting environment in our life.
In conclusion, changing lifestyle let people know their ability and potential and try to develop it. Although Some people think that change is a huge risk and causes stress and anxiety and prefer to stay in a stable environment, Others believe that change makes stimulating our life and shows new approaches and leads to gain more experience in various fields.
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- Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing Why do you think it is happening How can this problem be solved 87
- Some people think that the government should not give international aid since they have disadvantaged people like unemployment and homeless in their country To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12032085561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79482886325 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564171122995 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3106217324 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244302531791 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07373812239 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411631204529 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145002965661 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258025044019 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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