Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that whether the changes in people’s lives is good or not is a subject of debate. While reasons can be given to justify the former, I think the latter is much more preferable.
On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons to think that individuals should settle down their lives. Firstly, people are more likely to choose a monotonous life as they are not willing to take the risks of changes. For example, for those who currently have a stable and decent salary, quitting the job to pursue their passion causes them to lost income. Also, there are lots of responsibilities towards our families, hence they nearly will not trade off their lives for trying any new but risky things. Secondly, having an unchanging life could help an individual to gain specific experience, especially in work. The more time we spend acquiring knowledge in any field, the more time we lost when we change to another realm.
On the other hand, others would argue that it is better to have more interesting lives by changing. The first prominent justification is that changes might help young generations have more experiences in different realms. Some youngsters now frequently hop their jobs for about two years after graduation not only to find their own passion but also to get life experience. Furthermore, only when people endure several sufferings in lives, will they be able to appreciate every moment in daily lives. This might help people enjoy their lives in a more meaningful and positive way. Last but not least, for those have to overcome life’s struggles, they will have a higher motivation than those who just have a monotonous life. Sufferings, in fact, make a person be able to face the difficulties of life.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, although many people think that it is better to have an unchanging life, it seems to me that having some struggles substantially benefits our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95107033639 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.695825764 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9081928575 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113827010561 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430457307928 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386782798376 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081848606994 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209468759428 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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