Some people prefer to work for the large company, while others prefer to work for the small company. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of the socio-economic dilemmas. Indeed, the question of whether it is better to be employed by a large company, or by small one remains a source of controversy. Although participating in a small business is beneficial to some extents, I would argue that working for the large enterprise offers more advantages
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should apply for the small firms. Firstly, the people who chose to work for these companies could be promoted quickly than these working for the larger corporations. To be more specific, the working environment of small firms is less competitive in the larger ones due to the limited number of employees. As a result of this the staffs could have a good opportunity to be a manager, which may help them to gain many important skills and leadership skill is a case of point. Secondly, in small business, people could be easier to build the relationship with their other colleagues, especially with the senior manager. These personal contacts can be a great benefit for them in the further career.
On the other hand, I believe that in spite of numerous advantages of taking part in small enterprises, working for the large companies results in more favorable outcomes. The most obvious of which are related to job security and the improvement in specialized knowledge. With regard to the former, the employees in the large firms will enjoy a higher degree of job security. This is due to the fact that profitable companies are less likely to go bankrupt than small start – up operations. Another advantage is that that larger enterprises could provide a well-develop training programs, which are designed to provide the knowledge in the certain fields for the employees. This may help them to obtain plenty of essential skills in their chosen profession.
In conclusion, working for small companies may be advantageous in some ways, it seems to me that applying for the large organizations is a wiser choice to guarantee a successful career in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08022922636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92853658516 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52435530086 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9243314425 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26929290643 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855548535932 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840206031501 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18071966392 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035655991714 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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