In today’s world, advertisement has become a powerful tool for marketing a product. While some believe that the advertisements may develop the living standard, others think the advertisement influence people to buy unnecessary things. In my opinion, the advertisements are useful as it improves the country economy and improve our lives.
Advertisement helps us to learn about new products. Customers use this opportunity to understand, compare the new product features, quality and cost before they purchase it. Advertisement plays a key role in developing the country economy. For example, China is pioneer in marketing electronic products across the world. A recent survey shows that China economy has boost up 15% compared to last year GDP. This is achieved through increasing number of in-country new products advertised and purchased by the people across the world. Although, there are multiple competitor in the market, the new products manufactured from China are preferred by many people because of their unique advertisements.
Technology development has created a major impact in advertisements. For example, Google and Facebook are the giant technology company has invested a lot in advertisements. With the technology, they promote the new products and made our life much easier and faster. Online shopping is one of the successful marketing strategy to quote. Customers can shop online any new products launched in market through smart phones or computer. This type of marketing strategy was attracted by lot of people because they don’t have to queue up in shop and waste their valuable time. Instead they can more quality time with their friends and family members.
In a nutshell, advertisements are very useful to increase the country economy and it helps people to improve the life by choosing the right products they need with lesser time and complexities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'competitors'?
Suggestion: competitors
...the world. Although, there are multiple competitor in the market, the new products manufac...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... in shop and waste their valuable time. Instead they can more quality time with their f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01233062209 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2722714927 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244172807063 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789984427277 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806937655434 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16548431349 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890449289011 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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