Modern technology has entered in each and every field which is affected the way of livingstyle. Mostly individuals think that modern technology and E-books will definitely replace traditional method of getting news. I will discuss the causes why modern technology is adopted rather than old-fashioned news in the forthcoming paragraph.
Modern technology is increased at a gignatic rate because of manifold reasons. To begin with, majority of individuals prefer to read e-books which is paperless and more convenient than buying expensive books. For instance, internet is a great source of information which take over books is that of Wikipedia and also replaced and bulky method of encyclopedia. Britannia encyclopedia went out of production but nobody misses it primarily because of availability of all sorts of information.
Moreover, new-fashioned technology is a first choice of each and every section of society because of accessible latest news and current affairs. In addition, in today's era, individuals are taking keen interest in saving a precious time and money by reading e-books which is very fruitful to read it in a better way. Furthermore, with the help of techno appliances, information is presented in a videos and pictures which is very attractive and easily understand by literate and illiterate humans.
On the other hand, newspapers and megazines are used by certain reasons. Firstly, newspaper has become an aredent habit of masses because of information in detail which awares the youngsters about thr current issues. Secondly, electric appliances are not required. That's why, availability of news is at a economical price and more affordable by affluent and middle-class families. Thirdly, megazines provide a info about latest fashion, hairstyles and recipes.
To sum up, technology is flourishing by leap and bounds which provide us new avenues while keeping ourselves with up-to-date affairs which is impossible by acquiring traditional ways. So, techology will be surely reduce the selling of newspapers and megazines in a future period.
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- Leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. Some people say that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 71
- Some people say government should give the health care the first priority, some other believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museum town hall and sporting facility is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. discuss both views. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52664576803 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05101200367 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2055087606 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158980459641 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515780897463 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591178576793 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916569571222 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705830641678 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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