Nowadays in a new era of dealing with a dilemma and the huge distinction of wealthy and poor individuals, the improvement of financial ability is an essential attributes . Indeed, what vast majority of people advocate are two different perceptions which encompass negative and positive attributes. From my point of view, I have always been a strong proponent of constructing modernized economy instead of getting involved by some destructive implications.
On one hand certain individuals claim that having a sustainable economy in a particular area even if it’s an outdated one would have a significant impact on the environment. for example, ozone depletion is one of the repercussions which emerges from industrialization economy and people’s life will be overwhelmed by this issue. In addition, Due to have a development of industrial facilities, the pollution as well as the increase of physical illnesses among elders would be tangible consequences. were authorities to consider these circumstances, a soil erosion and the frustration of wood wouldn’t happen.
On the other hand, regardless of having some drawbacks, considerable number of people have a hunch about expanding economy. As a matter of fact, ability to accumulate financial criteria such as personal vehicle, having a suitable accommodation or being in a welfare stem from the renovation of the economy. furthermore, practical occupations will be come out for the ones who are unemployed and provide an opportunity to fulfill their accomplishments. should government go through this situation both wealthy and poor resident will take advantage of it.
To conclude, despite the fact that eluding fragile economy deteriorates people’s health, staying in credits would be fundamental principles. That’s why providing a time to renew economy has a positive outcome either for youths or elders. Therefore, it is highly recommended that not only in a particular area but also all around the world the collaboration in order to globalize economy has to be happened and should be widespread later on.
- the graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem? 89
- People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance.Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focussing on physical appearance? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.503125 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33461122039 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7571129985 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0612430350007 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211193775496 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247621942191 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383305919995 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172915425502 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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