Unlike before, education plays a crucial role in our country, owing to that it is very wiered one for the developments such as technologies, business, sports, medias etc. However, education is an asset, which is very effective for the academic curricular activities to practical factors. Hence, education is the optimal factor to make a good nation.
To begin with, I completely agree with the suggestion. Firstly, education is very helpful for the children to arouse their skills and attitudes are maintaining and it to be a better scenario. Every children are growing up and progressing more to get a teen age subsequently, the adult period. Secondly, decision making capacity and problem solving elements are achieving more life ideology due to the education. Finally, this acts as a vital role for future studies and job prosperities, furthermore companies, institution and schools are hiring staffs based on their education level. Sometimes, education and experiences makes a man perfect. For instance, one of my neighbour she stopped her education career in her tenth standard and been a jobless person and dependent with her husband. Nowadays she is worrying a lot about her life.
Ostensibly, the growth and development of every individual is depending upon their educational status. For a while, if a person gets some skills from his school or any educational institution he may become famous in such a field. Thereafter, he will be an eminent through the invention of a technological method, moreover, the country has appreciated him at an efficient criteria due to his expansions the nation become famous and honourable. However, all other nationalities are pride on him this is one of the footsteps for us to achieve the good country.
In conclusion, education is an asset, which is alarmingly raising to the world day-by-day. As a conscience, we should respect and to give good chances to the younger children to achieve their notion in a reliable manner..
- The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women form 1978 to 2008 56
- Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. 36
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The two pie charts show the proportion of population and area in seven continents in percentage terms. 78
- In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regards it as a hobby. To what extend, do you think this is a positive trend. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...taining and it to be a better scenario. Every children are growing up and progressing...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...rowing up and progressing more to get a teen age subsequently, the adult period. Secondl...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...wth and development of every individual is depending upon their educational status. For a wh...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reliable manner" with adverb for "reliable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ounger children to achieve their notion in a reliable manner..
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...chieve their notion in a reliable manner..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21630094044 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02662912807 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2064204891 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137525808564 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464562201989 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040722160706 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782589916624 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332310084461 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.