A country’s monuments and historical sites are of paramount importance to a country. But there are some who disagree with the above notion and claim that government should destroy the historic monuments, but I disagree with this fact and I will discuss the argument here.
First and foremost, the historical sites show our cultural and historical traditions to the people from other country. Besides, these are the means we rely on to tell the younger/next generation about the sacrifices made by our ancestors.
Secondly, these are also the places for revenue generation because foreign people may visit these places and the amount thus received can be used by the government for improving the infrastructure of these sites. Moreover, the foreigners buy handicrafts at such places, which provides a livelihood to those people and also it exhibits the beauty of art in our country, this the money flows between our country and the foreign countries. It is quite apparent that, tourists visit helps in strengthening the bond with the foreign countries.
In my regard, historical sites are a pride to a nation that represents our culture, heritage and traditions on a very large platform. Destroying such monuments and sites would be dismantling ourselves with our own hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90482776064 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5221611447 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126326838161 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528757249372 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475846521815 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811946839707 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04799165336 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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