People are divided on the issue of allocation of funds for health care by government. Some asserts believe that the government should invest only in medical field. While, others opine that there exist other areas can not be neglected by authorities. This essay intends to discuss both views. I, however, side with latter view.
On the one hand, prioritizing to health care sector by government would lead to a healthier and happy society. It is quite obvious that people feel free from financial burdened to some extent if the authorities support the health care area. It would make it more useful and cost - effective especially for the poor society. For instance, the higher expenditure of medical treatment are easily affordable by rich people but impoverish society is not able to bear the cost of medical treatment. That's why government should consider firstly health care area.
On the other hand, government's investment should not confined within the boundaries of health care. Firstly, Education system which concerns the long-term development of the nation, should allot similar funds. The funds can be used to provide free and mandatory education in primary schools. Also, for the higher education of students, subsidies should be granted by government.
Secondly, to attract the public towards using their public transport, transportation system should be improved and make more convenient for the people to opt it. Infrastructure should be well-maintained by using funds. Thirdly, it is advisable that if taxpayer's money should be distributed to promote public facilities. Then it will not only beneficial for citizens life but more helpful to attract more investment and create various job opporunities in another fields.
To sum up, funds should be used by government in each and every sector equally which will put more impact upon the individual and society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt should invest only in medical field. While, others opine that there exist other ar...
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Suggestion: That's
... to bear the cost of medical treatment. Thats why government should consider firstly ...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'confine'
Suggestion: confine
...hand, governments investment should not confined within the boundaries of health care. F...
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Suggestion:
...ic towards using their public transport, transportation system should be improve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...transport, transportation system should be improved and make more convenient for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78107061335 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9962091709 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225605166009 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732555798261 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538286462791 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126278730196 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604078829286 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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