In contemporary epoch, it is argued by some people that whether money ought to be spent on entertainment as well as sports stadium or money should be utilised not merely for education but also for health center. I agree, as much as, I disagree with the given statement and would discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs with the conclusion at last.
To embark, people mey become a educated perosn along with eseential cognizance concerning their field. For instance, nowadays, majority of people are from deprived family. Owing to lacking of money, once has not been taking addmission in private marvellous alma mater inspite of idel student in education. If government will spend money to build the school or college, indigent student may be take addmission in the institute without paying money. Consequently, it is beneficial for not only individual but also for nation. In addition, several people have been suffering from manifold hazardious drastic malady. To illustrate, modern era, folks have been afflication from cancer which is one of the most perilous diseases, for needy people might be afford treatment to cope with this malady. If money will be used on hospital which has been built by bureaucrat, people would take essential treatment without paying money or charge. That's why it is fruitful for mankind besides family.
However, entertainment and sports stadium are playing crucial role for humankind. Building theaters is major income for government. Overall economy of the nation will boost by leaps and bounds if money would spent on theaters. I would like to throw some light on epitome, theaters is basic needs for people. Most of the people, on weekends, prefer to go in order to watch distinct fascinating movies with their kith and kin; money has been spent over their by spectators. As a result, overall income of the country is increasing. It is advantages for nation.
To recapitulate, I personally aver that although both have been palying significant role for mankind, money ought to be allocated for both things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t last. To embark, people mey become a educated perosn along with eseential co...
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Line 3, column 934, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...eatment without paying money or charge. Thats why it is fruitful for mankind besides ...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...oost by leaps and bounds if money would spent on theaters. I would like to throw some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15615615616 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7219468364 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0206557588 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175307587699 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510866104568 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549237163854 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106684047331 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495545720163 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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