It is argued that History is the most vital course in school while there are some viewpoints that Technology and Science are more crucial than History and those must be pivotal subjects nowadays. This essay agrees that benefits of courses such as Technology and Science far outweigh History’s. Firstly, this essay will discuss the benefit of each subject and secondly, discuss why Technology and Science are more essential than History.
On the first hand, in the modern world which machinery and science are two of the most powerful aspects, which are dominating the reputation ranking of every country. Apple for example, an US technology company which was made the US became the most powerful country back in 1998 by inventing and selling new technical devices worldwide. In addition, Science also play a vital role in country’s medicine, by finding a new cure for a disease or a treatment for cancer it will be very helpful nowadays. Therefore, it is straightforward that in order to prepare for the future, students should focus on learning Technology and Science instead of remembering the past when learning History at school.
On the other hand, some beliefs that History is a crucial subject to learn at school because people have to know about the origin of their country. In Vietnam for instant, every Vietnamese people know what their ancestors had to suffer to bring independence back for Vietnam over 100 years of being dominated. Thus, it is important to people to remember and respect their ancestors as well as what their forefather did.
In conclusion, each course has its own indispensable benefit but currently, in order to prepare for the revolution in future, Technology and Science are more important than History.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12937062937 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76090301469 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3173009029 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3636363636 7.06120827912 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282246443487 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109771917329 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651220466744 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170272826271 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617638774669 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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