Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, the environmental problem has aroused by people’s discussion. While the loss of plants and animals is seen as the dominant issue in the belief of some people, I take the view that there are much more significant and emergent environmental problems.
Advocates of the view about the most crucial issue belonging to the lack of plant and animal argue the essential role of these species on the environment. The species play a significant role in stabilizing the ecosystem since they are parts of the food chain. That means if they die, the natural environment will be spoiled. Besides, bushes of trees also do tasks to keep the environment fresh and healthy thanks to their capacity to absorb the harmful fumes. In the south of Viet Nam, for instance, inhabitants usually experience several severe floods per annum due to the shortage of trees living along river banks.
However, in my favor of the idea supporting for more emergency of other problems, there are a plethora of reasons to support this idea. The shortage of trees or animals is not the origin, which could stem from other issues virtually. Therefore, instead of focusing on this problem, we need to find deal m with primary pollution sources such as the exhausted gasses from vehicle and industrial zones. Emitting acid gases is the most compelling evidence supporting this view, which not only results in water and air pollution but also skills animals and trees.
All in all, we can not deny both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, to deal with environmental problems more effectively, I suggest that we should concentrate on more emergent issues which contribute to other issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03237410072 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75038756321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7277001822 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211671761957 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709203777595 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767983673909 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142147426662 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088590815568 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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