Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, problems relating to environment have aroused by people’s discussion. While the loss of plants and animals is supposed as the dominant issue in the belief of some people, I take the view that there are much more significant and emergency troubles necessitating being removed.
Advocates of the view about the most crucial issue belonging to the lack of plants and animals argue their essential role on the environment. Indeed, these species play a significant role in stabilizing the ecosystem since they are parts of the food chain. In other words, if they die, the natural environment will be spoiled tremendously. Furthermore, they, especially bushes of trees, also do tasks to keep the environment fresh and healthy thanks to their capacity to absorb the harmful fumes and prevent floods. In the south of Viet Nam, for instance, inhabitants usually experience several severe floods per annum due to the shortage of trees living along river banks.
However, in my favor of the idea supporting for more important others, there are a plethora of reasons supporting this idea. First, the shortage of trees or animals is not the origin, which could stem from other issues. Therefore, instead of focusing on this trouble, we need to find and deal with primary pollution sources such as the exhausted gasses from vehicles and industrial zones, which not only results in water and air pollution but also skills animals and trees. Second, in comparison with solving the shortage species, enhancing mankinds’ awareness is better due to all of these troubles originating from the actions of people. In reality, attempts to solve the lack of species like plants and animals or other problems are prone to be pointless if people are not receptive to the importance of their negative actions for nature.
All in all, we can not deny both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, to deal with environmental problems more effectively, I suggest that we should concentrate on core issues in lieu of focus too much on the lack of trees and animals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09144542773 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78742176008 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.786093719 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177090451149 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563871752749 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483472911419 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108890523452 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312622430684 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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