Some people opine that music is advantageous in uniting people from different cultural and age background. I personally agree that music is beneficial in joining people from various cultural and age backgrounds because of several reasons.
Firstly, music serves as a common interest between people. This is because music can be enjoyed by anyone from different age groups and cultural backgrounds. There is no limitation of who can listen to music or being a fan of some music groups. This then lead to music becomes a common interest for people to unite and to befriend. For example, a band named Queen has a lot of fans from young to old people. As a result, when they meet, they can talk about Queen's songs and albums, which will make them to befriend easier.
Secondly, music is often being used to communicate messages. This is because, a lot of people often feel shy or scared to say something directly to other people. Thus, they use music, which has lyrics that represent their feelings, to express their feelings to other people. It can be expressed by sending them to addressed people, or by putting the music in social media with a hope that the addressed people will see and get the messages. As a result, a lot of the addressed people usually can understand the messages. This has happened many times which resulted in music becoming one of the most popular communication bridges between people. For example, Chris wanted to confess his feelings to his crush but he was too scared to say it directly. Then he sent ILYSB song, which was produced by LANY band, to his crush. Consequently, his crush finally understood about Chris' feelings and accepted his confession. This song has helped Chris to communicate the message that he was too scared to say.
In conclusion, I completely agree that music is a great way in uniting people from various cultural and age backgrounds because music serves as a common interest between people and music is often being used to communicate messages.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problem To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86549707602 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59225327185 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464912280702 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0404293605 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5789473684 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275800285996 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968186149732 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10671641144 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23401062713 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111839346354 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.