Being lingual is the need of the time. Certain people opine that learning a new language is required only if one has to travel for work or to visit a particular country. While others are of the view that such reasons are not the only reasons for learning a new language. This essay shall discuss both benefits of learning a new language and why some think it is not as important. Also in the end I will give my point of view.
According to some people new language must be learned under two circumstances, that is, if they are travelling for adventure or fun or visiting the country for work purpose. Let's further discuss why in such cases learning a new mother tongue is of use. First of all if you are visiting a country for a business endeavor for example selling of a product, then it is of utmost importance that you learn their basic language in order to make them connect to you more and build trust so that they will show positive response; doing so they will appreciate the effort you have put in in order to learn their respective native language. Secondly, if you are travelling for fun or on vacations then you must learn their basic communication skills for instance, how you say hello, how to introduce oneself, how to ask for directions and so on, especially in countries where they do not speak any other language than their own native one. To make a case in point, I went to Saudia Arabia to perform my holy prayer, there I faced a major language barrier, as I were not able to communicate with the embassy, moreover, calling a taxi explaining location and negotiating the price was a huge pain in the neck. So, I think before visiting any country you must learn their basic communication skills.
On the other hand, some people think that above mentioned reasons are not the only reasons one must be learning a new language. Why? Let's discuss this aspect as well. All private school franchises are making languages like Chinese and German mandatory. The question here is why? because learning of official language and mother tongue is not enough in this era. People are constantly moving towards advancement and development. Our future generation must be well equipped with multi lingual skill because we do not want language to be a hurdle in their achievements.
According to me, everyone must be multi lingual in order to excel more and more in the future and broadening horizons for their success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67523364486 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56309476139 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488317757009 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.8170226645 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.315789474 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288095214601 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983211088809 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937858423203 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188414596407 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120392754653 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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