Learning foreign languages have many advantages including gathering knowledge, to be aware of other cultures and creating chances for good job opportunity. While some indviduals believe the only reason for learning foreign language is the travelling abroad or working in foreign country. I believe that everyone should learn other languages though they not travel or working.
Learning foreign languages can create good chances for good jobs. Today’s economical situation most employees require their workers to know at least one foreign language. And sometimes workers must work with a worker who speaks another languages they can easly spaeak with other nations and easy understand their original culture when people go abroad for travelling purpose they need to order an interpretator who translate inhabitants words. Finally, students who study abroad should learn at least one foreign language. Because they must live another country with stranger roommates.
On the other hand, some people argue that only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Firstly, it requires some resource, for example money and time. If people want learning foreign language , he or she would join tutuorials and pay for it. In addition, personals do not know what happened it the future in advance. Perhaps foreign language we have learned may not be what we need in the future.
In conlusion, it is better for a person to learn foreign language if he has the opportunity there is no need for it if there is a definite job and there is no time.
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 56
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 61
- Many people think schoolchildren should study fewer subjects with great details but some people believe that it is better to study variety of subjects and develop their knowledge Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in differnt countries in 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59535289526 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5787729264 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444886357835 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179401442453 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150956511114 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299975414326 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116952769206 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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