In recent years, interactions between different countries seem to be more frequent with the rapid globalization. Foreign languages, an effective tool to communicate abroad, are becoming increasingly important for the people who want to travel or work out of their homeland.
Indeed, this is the only reason for some people to learn a foreign language. Admittedly, foreign languages are hardly used in daily life or during work for many people if they do not have a certain job such as tour guide. Because they have few opportunities to interact with foreign people in their hometown. Meanwhile, learning a foreign language is by far more time-consuming and money-consuming without language environment due to different culture. As a result, people may tend to learn a foreign language only when they have to learn during the time traveling or working in a foreign country.
However, in my opinion, there are more reasons why people chose to learn a foreign language. Firstly, foreign languages make them more competitive in a job interview. With the trend of economic globalization, people are more likely to communicate with foreign people or company either in their life or in their work, therefore, many international firms demand their employees to learn a relative foreign language. Secondly, some people learn foreign just for their interests. As we all know, there are various cultures around the world, and enormous foreign people are attracted by these unique cultures. To learn more about these, people should learn the foreign language.
In conclusion, traveling or working in foreign counties are important reason for people to learn a foreign language, but I believe these is not the only reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have a certain job such as tour guide. Because they have few opportunities to interact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28832116788 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89381078694 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514598540146 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6554420473 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501378047336 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2294817246 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151053187847 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355974707816 0.151304729494 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158321335116 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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