Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution.
Nowadays, people doing jobs in a different way like profession, self-employed etc. All, such as self-employment and a job they have own advantages and disadvantages.
So, self-employment in people has a lot of freedom. They have no limited boundary such as time. But, in the business, they have faced more problems. Many time their products or supply of goods not proper then they can not achieve profit.
However, some people think the job is better. They have fix income in the job. But, they are built to certain rules and regulations. Many time in the job they have sacrificing their holiday for, the overburden of work. While in recession time employee not face out the salary problems because their salary is fixed.
Self-employment and job both are two sides of a coin. They have run by certain their rules and regulations. All people can't success in business because in that require own ability, mind etc. In job our salary fix than we are relaxed and tension free. In the job, we can not take their decision and not doing the implementation in any area. We do not worried about market fluctuation up or down and another benefit is we are tress-less. Another, we can easily change our job anytime.
To sum up, good discussion of both opinion but job offer safety and reduce stress. While, business giving freedom and new opportunities of growth. But, I think so the job is better than self-employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Nowadays, people doing jobs in a different way like profession, self-employed etc. All...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many times'.
Suggestion: Many times
...built to certain rules and regulations. Many time in the job they have sacrificing their ...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hey have sacrificing their holiday for, the overburden of work. While in recession time employ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...their rules and regulations. All people cant success in business because in that req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81893004115 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8680677225 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 19.1820257892 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.7619047619 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5714285714 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251510402812 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896938559636 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10388754829 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157416936509 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595476592031 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.49 12.4159519038 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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