Tourism industries have grown rapidly and it can bring more financial benefit to the communities. Although some country’s residents claim that tourists have impact their peace of life, this essay will discuss on this phenomenon and some of strategy will be given to reduce the impact of local communication.
It is true that tourism have impact the local society. Many people tend to travel abroad than travel domestic because they can experience different culture of view and history in other countries. In addition to the groups of tourism are visiting from day to day in different attractions which will cause overcrowds and environmental problems to the local residents if they lived nearest those tourism attractions. Another serous issues have impact those holiday place is increased price on housing. Local residents found it is difficult to afford a house in those famous place, they are force to live in outskirt of city in order to buy an affordable property.
On the other hand, consider the long-term benefits that governments and business are play an important role to reduce the effect on local society. Although there are some impacts on tourism fields, it also has several benefits to the country. The country’s governments and local businesses can receive more money from their contribution, such as travel visa fee, shopping and consumer tax. Those profits can be use to contribute our society and local people. For example, the profit can use to maintain the local environment and building, support them favorable interest rate for residents who wish to buy a house.
To sum up, although there are some effects have caused our local society from those holidaymakers. Government and business need to take responsibility to protect our local environment and communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25694444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8029329739 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7341703647 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280495290704 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923090505512 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048943540202 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160594509767 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240219463657 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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