: Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community.
The believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has been widely assume that all students should be forced to do volunteer work in their spare time to support local inhabitants. Also, many believe that this would be advantage for both sides. From my perspective, I partially agree with this idea.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why unpaid jobs are proven to bring benefit for both teenagers and local community as a whole. One reason is that a wide range of hand-on experience might be acquire through this kind of job. For instance, volunteering at Hanoi Youth club, a voluntary organization which offers free tour for foreign tourists, enable them to enhance their English proficiency. Moreover, unpaid work would be economical for local community when government do not need to pay for the volunteers and authorities, thus, could spend budget to strengthen the welfare of local society.
On the one hand, it is my belief that obligatory unpaid-jobs somehow have detrimental impact on the development of adolescents, as well as the freedom of society. Firstly, it is evident that the pressure of study accounts for a great deal of how students spend their free time. They are usually required to attend at lecture or complete a huge workload of assignments. Consequently, they would be prone to high levels of stress and depression, if they were forced to do unpaid job. Secondly, it also definitely goes against the ideal of constitution, as well as human rights when a group of people is required to do unpaid jobs, especially it might goes again their will.
It goes without saying that, although volunteer work may offer a vast variety of benefit for youngsters and community, I completely contradict the idea of making it compulsory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assumed'.
Suggestion: assumed
It has been widely assume that all students should be forced to d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...adict the idea of making it compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01048951049 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80893736165 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3038394601 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303891809852 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989951632602 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627737408878 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172923055615 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800871826346 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.