Nature is unpredictable thing in which people cannot say accurate information on this, Also, climate changes affect in both side positive and negative. In general it is a common belief that climate changes has numerous number of drawbacks in business whereas, other think that it gives more number of ways to improve business. This essay despite both view of climate changes and views about positive and negative side.
To begin with, climate change affected more to the farmer who grown seasonable crops according to season. It goanna fail due to climate change. Also, people who live in poor area near to river or mountain are most affected by unexpected flood and volcano. A good illustration of this case is when the heavy rain fall dripped at that time all the rivers are flooded also dam which, constructed for save water also out of the level and release the water situation occur and when the tones of water released at that time nearby villages are also get flooded with the water which create negative impact in human life.
In contrary, climate changes give the chance to think to people for make better way to outcome from the problem and this situation create new methods and paths to improve business style. If there is a drought situation is created than business who worked on water supplies try to make new ways to outcome this situation and provide water in those region to improve their business. Also, situation like earthquake is the dangerous thing among the climate change which forced to builder that create infrastructures which is earthquake free. For illustrates, in the UK, there are many high-rise building were constructed which is earthquake free that’s the way to think about new idea to overcome the situation and improve their business.
In my view, there are few negative effects are there, advantages are far away. I strongly agree with that climate change has positive impact and provide more business option.
In conclusion, climate change has both impact negative and positive both but, positive are outweigh negative impacts. I firmly believe that it gives new ideas and option to business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this region' or 'those regions'?
Suggestion: this region; those regions
...ome this situation and provide water in those region to improve their business. Also, situat...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ive and positive both but, positive are outweigh negative impacts. I firmly believe that...
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Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gives new ideas and option to business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, in conclusion, in general, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0308988764 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4419452319 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9136984951 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303503011713 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117453945273 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089574772587 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202730923584 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907259426388 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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