While some people think living in the countryside offers more health benefits than that in cities, others have the opposite opinion. From my preference, both sides of the argument are of paramount importance in equal measure.
On the one hand, there are several advantages on health arising from staying in the countryside. The first one is to mitigate exposure to polluted air. This is because the main culprit of this pollution in major cities are millions of private vehicles that offer tremendous amounts of carbon emissions into the air. This has led to numerous people suffering from respiratory diseases. Moreover, due to the further escalation in prices in major cities, people, especially breadwinners, must work harder to make ends meet, resulting in a shortage of regular exercises. As a result, they are likely to get metabolic diseases like obesity, having negative consequences on their physical and mental abilities.
On the other hand, living in cities can offer people more health benefits to some extent. Firstly, thanks to higher living standards, the increased number of individuals in urban areas tend to engage in gym facilities, loaded with a series of modern equipment and tools, to keep fit. Secondly, many big cities provide their citizens with multiple sports complexes, including basketball yards and swimming pools, which can spur people, especially youngsters, attend to sports with their peers. Therefore, this can serve as an excellent tool to release high levels of work-related stress and boost their physical and mental wellbeings without affecting their productivity.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that both the countryside and urban places are of paramount significance equally overall considering their health benefits on individuals.
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- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- As computers translate quickly and accurately learning foreign languages is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- You have had a class discussion on the importance of exercise Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question Exercise is important for our health but are there things that are more important Write your composition 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47080291971 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8231218623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6327865641 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143026390235 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495856859365 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646023619815 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964716350441 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645087748405 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.