Environment is getting worse day by day and innumerable factors were governing his global issue and one of these factors is accelerating number of cars on roads which cause air pollution. Some individuals opine that globally car free day is key to this problem while other of thought that other methods should be introduced to tackle the air pollution. However, I am of mind that car-free day is not only way to control air pollution.
Initiatively, the numbers of cars on roads were drastically accelerating from last few years as it involves the burning of fuel for running the engine which release harmful gases in the atmosphere. The banning of car on roads for particular days was recorded helpful in declining air pollution in Delhi. Last year’s even-odd policy was introduced in Delhi for one month and the results were amazing as a colossal reduction was noticed in pollution in Delhi’s air as compared to other days and people use more public transportation like metro for commuting. This not only helps in controlling air pollution while also in traffic congestion problem.
Others support the view that car-free day will not be more effective in reducing air pollution as cars were not sole responsible for it. The other causes such as industries, nuclear wars, plastic burning also prevails. Moreover, car –free day may cause a problem to an individual who entirely depend on car for daily commuting. “So, before” legalizing this day public transportation ought to be improved. So, no hurdles were caused in people’s quotidian life.
Conclusively, I believe that car-free day is a good idea to dwindle the air pollution whilst many other methods have to be introduced to get an effective result.
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 80
- The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent what you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week.Do you think it is a good thing for the customer,shop staff and company as a whole ? 78
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21268656716 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95999492377 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0158360068 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255488713581 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104205605485 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833238907028 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179267560957 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553234164819 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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