Cities are growing rapidly and so are the regional areas due to expanding population and the need for places that people can work and live. Some people believe that companies and industries should move to regional centers while others think that they should remain in the cities. I believe that the best idea is for regional areas to be developed and that companies and industries should move out of the cities.
Moving from city centers to regional areas will take some of working population of companies out of the cities. This has the advantage of relieving city overcrowding and the pressure on infrastructure. For example, taking manufacturing plants to regional areas encourages families to live and work in these centers. Overall, decreasing the population in city centers is a practical solution to many urban issues.
To reduce pollution and keep cities cleaner and healthier it is a good idea to encourage companies to move and operate in regional areas. Traditionally, many industries and companies set up business headquarters in the city centers, but as the technology developed, the need to be city based has diminished. For example, car-manufacturing plants no longer need to be based in urban areas and can be moved out to the regional areas. For a healthier community it is quite good to move industries and companies outside the cities.
This essay has argued that moving companies and industries to regional areas would be very advantageous while it would decrease the population in city centers and reduce pollution in urban areas. In my opinion, relocating companies to these developing regional areas will benefit both people who work for these businesses and city residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19202898551 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89770594574 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427536231884 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.00805846 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339181290452 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140303633485 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676870976177 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23175881696 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458462051927 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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